Tuesday 18 February 2020

1.6.- Writing: contrast links and how to write an essay.

Team discussion about five positive and Negative aspects about being employee and self-employed


Linking words of contrast

 

Linking word

Example

Structure

Although

 

She walked home by herself, although she knew that it was dangerous.

Full clause, + although + full clause

Although she knew that it was dangerous, she walked home by herself.

Although + full clause, full clause

Contrary to

 

Contrary to others, he set out alone.

Contrary to + noun clause, full clause.

Conversely

Poor health is accepted as an attribute of normal ageing. Conversely, youth is depicted as a time of vitality and good health.

Sentence. + Conversely, + full clause.

 

The staff of any organisation are its best ambassadors or conversely may be its worst.

Full clause + or conversely + verb clause

 

Despite / In spite of

 

I still enjoyed the week despite the weather.

Full clause + despite / in spite of + noun clause

I still enjoyed  the week despite having a busy agenda.

Full clause + despite / in spite of + - ing verb clause

Despite repeated assurances that the product is safe, many people have stopped buying it.

Despite / in spite of + noun clause / -ing verb clause, full clause.

 

Despite the fact (that) / In spite of the fact (that)

I will go clubbing tonight despite the fact (that) I’m tired of work.

 

Full clause + despite the fact (that) / In spite of the fact (that) + full clause

Despite the fact (that) I’m tired of work, I will go clubbing tonight.

Despite the fact (that) / In spite of the fact (that) + full clause, + full clause

Even though

 

Even though he never completed college, he runs a successful software company.

Even though + full clause, + full clause.

 

However

 

This is one possible solution to the problem. However, there are others.

Sentence or full clause./,/;+ However, / however, + full clause

This is one possible solution to the problem, however, there are others.

This is one possible solution to the problem; however, there are others.

However hungry I am, I never seem to be able to finish off a whole pizza.

However + inverted full clause, full clause.

In contrast

 

We didn’t have to wear masks two years ago. In contrast today, you’re not allowed to leave without it.

Sentence. + In contrast, + full clause

 

Nevertheless

Their team hadn’t lost a game the entire season. Nevertheless, we beat them by a huge margin last night

Sentence. + Nevertheless, + full clause

 

Though

They're coming next week, though I don't know which day.

Full clause, + though + full clause.

 

Though I do not usually drink coffee, I have had two cups today.

Though + full clause, full clause.

 

 

We went to high school together. I haven't seen her for years, though.

Sentence. + Full clause, + though

On the other hand

 

 

He's a good guy. His brother, on the other hand, is a very selfish man.

Sentence. + Noun clause, + on the other hand, + verb clause

He's a good guy. On the other hand, his brother is a very selfish man.

Sentence. + On the other hand, + full clause.

On the other hand followed by a comma can also be placed at the begining of a paragraph when contrasting a previous one.

Whereas

 

He must be about 60, whereas his wife looks about 30.

Full clause + whereas + full clause

While / whilst

 

I read it while you were drying your hair.

Full clause + while /whilst + full clause

 

While I was in Italy, I went to see Alessandro.

While / whilst + full clause, + full clause

 

While having your English class, you must pay attention.

While + -ing verb clause, + full clause

 

You must pay attention while having your English class.

 Full clause + while + -ing verb clause

 

Sources:

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/

https://www.macmillandictionary.com/us/dictionary/american/



Collaborative online game about the linking words of contrast on wordwall

https://wordwall.net/es/resource/52777593


Exercises 1 and 2 on page 14


Individual online exercise about the linking words of contrast

https://www.espressoenglish.net/linking-words-contrasting-ideas/


Video about perspectives on global poverty



C1 Advanced Writing Requirements 

The C1 Advanced Writing exam has two writing parts, which you must complete in 90 minutes. Both parts have a word limit of between 220-260 words. We recommend getting lots of writing practice under these conditions!

Part 1 is always a discursive essay. It requires you to think about arguments for and against a topic.

Part 2 is a situationally based writing task. This could be a letteran emaila reporta proposal or a review and you have three options to choose from.

 

How to write a C1 essay

Before you begin 

When you turn over the paper and begin Writing Part 1, take some time to read the task instructions. Identify all parts of the question, underlining which parts are obligatory and noting which parts are optional.

Let’s take a look at an example question!

Remember, you don’t have to use the opinions expressed in the box, but they may help you to get the ball rolling. Also, you only have to talk about two of the options given, not all three.

Make a plan

Take ten minutes to lay out your ideas. Make a pros and cons list for each of the three options and then decide which two you feel most confident with. Here’s some things you might come up with, can you think of any more?

Structure your essay

The essence of a good essay is a clear structure.

Introduction

Here you want to introduce the topic in your own words. Your first line should also grab the reader’s attention, then you should paraphrase the question. Finally, try using a statistic or a rhetorical question. This will make them want to read on, right?

Paragraph 1

Discuss the first option you’ve chosen. Include a good topic sentence and remember to give reasons for your answer. Describe some of the advantages, and even some of the disadvantages too. This will give a well-balanced argument.

Paragraph 2

Here’s where you introduce the second option. Again, try to present both sides of the argument and give reasons for your ideas. Gradually work towards the conclusion.

Conclusion

State your final opinion. This should be a summary of the rest of the essay and point clearly to which option you think is the most important. Do not introduce any new arguments at this stage. The conclusion is where you tie-up any loose ends. 

Useful expressions 

To make your essay flow it’s best to use some key phrases. These will link all your ideas together, and help it sound semi-formal. Take a look at the expressions below. Why not use some in your next essay?

Introduction:

It is often said that…

It is normally thought that...

It is commonly believed that..

Many people feel that…

We live in an age when..

More and more…

Introducing & Addition:

Firstly, secondly, thirdly…

In addition…

What is more…

Examples:

For example…

For instance…

As a case in point…

Contrasting:

In contrast…

On the one hand… On the other hand…

Alternatively…

However…

Conclusion:

All things considered…

As far as I am concerned…

In light of the above…

In conclusion…

Some final tips

Avoid contractions (I’m, they’re, we’re) as this is a formal writing.

Use academic words or formal language

Use the impersonal style when it is possible. 

Practise under timed conditions.

Use model answers to practise fixed expressions.

https://oxfordhousebcn.com/en/how-to-write-a-c1-advanced-essay/

CAE essay examples

https://www.caeexamtips.com/blog/c1-essay-examples


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